Thursday, September 18, 2008

The Change

This week's Totally Optional Prompt is blank verse. I'm not very good at this, but here goes:

THE CHANGE

Suddenly a crashing noise came from the door downstairs,
Leading them into a room,
Where boys and girls are changed.
I think it used to be a jail,
Or binding cage somehow,
Something cold like iron and steel,
Makes the change seem real.


© Bobbi Rightmyer

4 comments:

SweetTalking Guy.. said...

Yeah, a little bit scary and the picture, good use of the prompt..

tumblewords said...

Nicely done! A little eery and a lot scary!

gautami tripathy said...

Scary is good here...

irrationality

Stan Ski said...

Could almost be the opening scene of a spine chilling movie.